Laviee
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Post by Laviee on Nov 9, 2011 2:39:06 GMT -6
Hello! So, today I was doing my français homework and I ended up doodling this instead. (I was very focused.) But anywho, I was thinking of creating a new creature for Crossroads instead of bringing in something from another forum. I would just like some critique on the lineart/sketch. I'm not sure if I'd want to go with a more sketchy lineart (though it would be tidier than it is right now) or if I'll clean it up completely. Any thoughts? And wings or no wings? If wings, which one? Or I suppose I could some of each. EDIT:And then I decided to procrastinate some more. I think I'm going to try dithering.
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Post by c r e m e on Nov 9, 2011 10:31:59 GMT -6
I think these are ADORABLE! And I really like the first uncolored one's wings best. But, I do like all of the wings. Maybe you could use them all ? and the last ones expression is by far the cutest.
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Post by Raven on Nov 9, 2011 13:15:42 GMT -6
Those are sososo cute! I love them!
Personally I like the face on the 3rd the best with the cute little mouth.
And I agree with Creme. I like all the wings.
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Post by Zelda324 on Nov 9, 2011 22:03:03 GMT -6
I like the thrid one the best, and the colored one looks so cool ^^
And wings would be pretty awesome with these guys I like all the wings you have doodled up and would love to see them all used for them ^^
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Post by ~*Nyx*~ on Nov 9, 2011 22:31:10 GMT -6
I like the third one too, the face is a bit cuter.
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Post by Laviee on Nov 9, 2011 22:32:55 GMT -6
Creme, what is it that you like about the first one? Is it the mane? Thank you everyone! What do you guys think about the horn? Or should I make that gender specific? Except then they'd be a little similar to Grifflings... Hm. Anywho, I was bored in French class. (Except this time I was being productive while I pixeled. Friend was quizzing me on stuff while I photoshopped away, heh.) So I tried to dither. Note the word tried. It's so hard. Someone give me the skills. Is this style preferable to the one before? And should I add more levels of shading...?
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Post by Zelda324 on Nov 9, 2011 22:54:00 GMT -6
I think the horns would be cute as just a random mutation kind of thing....
And idk I am not a big fan of dithering myself. I don't exactly like seeing the pixels so clearly....but thats me. It looks good though either way ^^;
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Post by ~*Nyx*~ on Nov 9, 2011 23:51:32 GMT -6
My shading is basically me abusing the dodge and burn tools, so I am no help here.
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Post by Laviee on Nov 10, 2011 1:52:56 GMT -6
--> Is that better? And... vs. I think I'm liking the dithering actually, just because I've never created anything like it before. Hmm... And I shaded the wings and made what I think is the first ever... Okay I need a name. Procrastinating is so fun.
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Post by c r e m e on Nov 11, 2011 16:36:50 GMT -6
I liked the first ones wings the best, but I love them all. Also the manes, and horns would be awesome as mutations. And, I do like the dithering, as I've never seen it done that way before.
And I like it with a little bit of highlight much better. If you shaded a bit more on the one on the left, it would be just fine. I like them both.
And, I love the cream one with wings.....-faints-
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Post by skdrift on Nov 12, 2011 20:04:55 GMT -6
These are so cute <3
I'm not going to lie, though. I really prefer the non-dithered one. I simply adore the way you colored the first one, although I do think you did a lovely job with the dithered pixels. But honestly, I'd collect them either way.
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